The shades of orange


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 30; the thirtieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

scene at the evening beach


Its a sunrise, or a sunset
its hard to decide
a weekday, or a weekend
impossible to find
but why bother
why bother to what it is
a moment
from your life is this
Put your bare feet down
let the sea drench it a bit
set yourself free to the vast vast sky
make a castle
take a walk
think, admire, observe
forget your worries
shed your inhibitions
this is your life
you live it once
and you never can turn the wheels back
love it
watch it turn the hues
from dawn to dusk
into the shades of orange....

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Credits

Image - Shades of Orange by Harsha Chittar
Courtesy - Curious Dino Photography via www.blogaton.in

37 Obiters:

T F Carthick said...

Really beautiful poem. Loved it.

Simran said...
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Simran said...

Hi Dreamer! :)

Your words have appealing power that says, ''Live your each moment at best''
Lovely read!

Best wishes...

the factfiction said...

Thanks :)
and thanks to you

the factfiction said...

thank you simran..am glad you liked it :)

samyyyr said...

Beautiful words... and the more important thing is it was spontaneously written by you. :)

the factfiction said...

thanks samie :)

Kappu said...

//why bother to what it is
a moment
from your life is this//

half the problems will get solved by itself if we start thinking as this! Enjoyed your post! ATB!

Do stop by my blog! Cheers - Kappu

Mr.Miglani said...

Lovely Post all the best for BAT
~Desire v/s Destiny
http://xs2rahulz.blogspot.in/

the factfiction said...

thnaks rahul :)

the factfiction said...

kappu..thanks a lot...yeah truly said...ATB!

Deepa from FictionPies said...

What an innovative way of saying 'Stop to smell the roses!". Nice piece! ATB for BAT!

Shashiprakash Saini said...

सुन्दर रचना

the factfiction said...

thanks deepa...and same wishes for you:)

the factfiction said...

dhanyawaad sashi ji

Vinay Leo R. said...

Straight and simple poetry.. Very beautiful, Tanaya. All the best for the Blog-a-Ton :)

Leo - My Blog-a-Ton Story

the factfiction said...

Thanks a ton leo...am glad you dropped by :)

Manasa said...

lovely ... A moment from life this is!

Jayashree Srivatsan said...

Very nice poem....BeaUtiful

the factfiction said...

Manasa thanks :)

the factfiction said...

jaish_vats..thanks lady :)

Neha said...

Lovely poem :)

the factfiction said...

Thank you neha :D

Kshitij KK Khurana said...

Ah! A very beautiful poem. Feel-good factor it has :)

aativas said...

Relevant message to all of us who are in a hurry and have no time for living :-)

Karan Shah said...

very true one should live life to fullest in each moment...best wishes for BAT :)

the factfiction said...

thanks a lot khistij

the factfiction said...

aativas..that was xactly my purpose :)

the factfiction said...

thank you karan :)

Apala Sengupta said...

the sweet and simple nature of ur poem touched my heart!

ATB for BAT

Do stop by Apala-BAT30 entry

the factfiction said...

thanks Apala...am honored :)

Aishwarya said...

loved the simpleness of the poem!
lovely read! :D

the factfiction said...

Thank you ashzzes :)
do drop by again

Anonymous said...

the beginning seemed to rhyme, esp the first 8 lines, with 8th one having 3 syllables less.

it's my preference to read rhyming poems with short lines.

but it's great still

:)

the factfiction said...

thank you fro bringing it to notice Yatin..but I don't find it being rhymed..and if it does it is only by chance. And as for syllables..i always forget counting while ih write..i have more interest in words than in numbers :P

Someone is Special said...

Simple and sweet poetry.. Loved your way of writing.. Keep writing.. All the best..

Someone is Special

the factfiction said...

Thank you :)
someone is indeed special :)

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